Jack
Seattle, WA
USA
/* Here we go! */
FADE IN:
EXT. beach DAY
Sunny beach, families playing.
GOON1
(angrily, bothered. he just can't believe how stupid GOON2 is being)
Hey! What are you doing?
GOON2
(resentful)
Nuthin! What's your problem?
/* have a multiline comment */
The 2 continue to walk down the beach, clearly unhappy. The surf is coming in. You can see the bulges of guns along their waistbands.
VACATIONER
(happily)
Hey you guys? What's up? I hope you're having a great vacation.
GOON1
Oh shut up!
/* Why is he so angry? */
CUT TO:
INT. cabana NIGHT
/* TODO: Need to figure out how we can shoot this, given lighting concerns, time of year, etc. */
KID is playing cards at a table.
PARENT
How was dinner?
Kid completely ignores them.
PARENT
uh, hello?
EXT. Market DAY
Chaotic scene of shopping. Lots of families. GOON2 is on the prowl, a scowl on his face.
GOON2
(muttering to self)
I _hate_ market day.
Suddenly goon2 shows up out of nowhere, startling goon1.
GOON2
WTF!
KID suddenly runs out of an alley!
GOON2
Watch it!
GOON1
What are you doing, you kid!
The kid ignores him.
KID
Bugger off, you ugly guy.
FADE OUT:
INT. Bedroom NIGHT
PERSON1 and PERSON2 are about to make love.
PERSON1
(timidly)
Are you sure?
FADE OUT: